A Ghostbusters Night before Christmas


by Zack

22 years, 10 months ago


Ok…this is pretty stupid, something I wrote a few years ago and it is pretty corny, but give me a break, he he

Twas the night before Christmas,
the creatures a stir,
ghosts and goblins,
a shadowy blur.

The busters in bed,
not from Slimer a peep,
in hopes that they'd,
be able to sleep.

The people in New York,
scared out of their wit,
they were afriad,
of some real scary s*it!

Janine at her desk,
downstairs alone,
drifting asleep,
suddenly the phone.

She quickly awoke,
answered, hung up,
a message she took
ringing the bell.

Ringing the alarm,
woke the boys with a fluster,
doing their job,
hey they're ghostbusters.

Peter, the reluctant,
having no fun,
started the car,
Here's Ecto-1!

Arriving on scene,
let's do it quick,
Marshmallow man,
they were in thick!

When what to their
wondering eyes should appear,
a giant white sailor,
I don't believe it, he's here!

Rushing to Ecto,
opened the back,
each then yielding,
a proton pack.

Let's blast him
so we can go home!
On Peter, on Ray,
on Winston, Egon!

Each of them shooting a powerful beam,
Ray then reminded,
Don't cross the streams!

On his shoulder,
he felt a tap,
run to the car,
and get us a trap.

Rolling it out,
across the street,
landing right at,
Puffy's large feet!

Merry Christmas,
Winston said with a grin!
Step on the pedal,
big boy's comin' in!

That's that,
and we can go home,
one matter left,
Pete said dialing the phone.

We saved the city mayor,
stop writing your will,
how to repay us?
We'll send you a bill.

Merry Christmas now,
hope you get what you want,
Merry Christmas to all,
and to all a good haunt!!!

THE END

Zack

Have a good one everybody!

by JESUSFREAK

22 years, 10 months ago


Nicey-nice.

by Iceman416

22 years, 10 months ago


Can I edit it? I think I can make it flow better. I'll post it in the fanfic section and say something like it was written by you and edited by me or something to that extent.

by Zack

22 years, 10 months ago


yeah, I don't mind, definetly looking back a lot of it just doesn't flow that well. I forgot how old I was when I did that but it is pretty retarded..lol

Anyway, Merry Christmas everyone… smile

Zack

by SpiffSupreme

22 years, 10 months ago


I wrote something like that in my fifth grade class. Except it wasn't about Christmas. And it was about the EGBs. And it was pretty bad. So I won't post it.