robert knippels
Here are acouple of pages from the comic.









Best regards,

Robert

what is the story behind it, also the artwork looks GREAT :-O
I dont think ya need to change anything. only thing ya need to do is make it so the view can zoom in and out so we can read the text

Is the story kinda the story of hellbent or is it different.
also do we get to see the containment unit in it also has it been updated for the new millenium.

and do we get to see some cool weapon upgrades (traps, particle throwers)
or are they the same old design

Too bad i could help ya upload the images because i have nothing but time lol, i have no life except work, and sleep lol.

GB3: The river of slime returns raising new questions with a new demon, Ozmantarous, in tow. They also gain a female ghost as a GB.

GB2K: Well into the 21st Century, a group of college student paranormal investigators discover the firehouse and all the gear locked up inside like a tomb. Ozmantarous returns and it's up to the old GBs long since retired to help the next generation defeat him again.

any artwork done, because even if it has holes in the plot i would like to read it and maybe help, two heads and 2 sets of eyes are better than 1 i would really like to help it gain its full potential, I have alot of ideas that could improve the story if it needs it.

So if its done just with a lot of holes please allow me to help you fix the holes

hope that made sense

Nah, I got a handle on it. I was just younger and dumber then.

all right man

well damn i was hoping to get a look at it because it may be some time till we see one lol

is there any way i can take a look at it, maybe cretique it a bit lol

:p :-)

(*janine) (*egon) (*peter) (*ray) (*winston) :-) (^_^)

Thanks Ben, for helping me out with those files.

Here is some of my story for the final destruction comic:

Hope you like it.

best regards,

Robert

GHOSTBUSTERS 3 THE FINAL DESTRUCTION :

The story starts all with an exorcism that went wrong in a old church, the victem died at least the priest thought that she didn't survive the ritual. When they put the body of this girl on holy ground into the church they heard strange noises out of the chest. The decide to put the chest into the catacombs and get the hell out of there. All those years this pure concentrated evil is put away into this church ( for almost 25 years ) and it became stronger and stronger. People aren't bussy anymore with religion and believe so the church lost it's power.

One day statue's are bleeding and the priests get terrorized by strange noises and other supernatural troubles. Then the first priest get killed. A young girl reporter sneak into the church where the police is bussy with there research and make some pictures here name is Tracy Winner ( she's one of the new ghostbusters later in the story ). When she saw the photographs she take into the church she saw some strange looking things on the photograph something she didn't saw when she was in that church. A couple of days later she decides to go to the bureau of abnormal psychology and parapsychology ( O.S.I.R. ), there she meets and older dr Raymond Stantz and dr Egon Spengler and funnyface dr Pete Venkman.

Ray and Egon decide to investigate this case. after some research in a hospital where they speak to a priest in shock and take some p.k.e. readings they decide to break into this church to find a diary in which they can find the information about what happened 25 years ago. They brought their proton packs with them. Soon they come into trouble with a stinky demon that tries to kill them but they will be saved by Venkman ( he finds out what they where up to in some papers that Ray had forgotten and he had followed the two guys ) You know never do something illegal without a Venkman in your neighbourhood. After they trapped the demon they find out that ghost fever is gripping New York again and that there something big is going to happen ( bigger than GOZER and VIGO it will be ultimate evil ).

They go to the mayor to ask for permission to ghostbust again. They find out there that Winston is working as a security officer and Walther Peck didn't forget him. The mayor asks for proof that the city is haunted again. Ray throws the trap on the table and opens the trap….They're back in bussiness. After cleaning up the place and being back in bussiness they find out that they didn't have the strength that they had once. They decide to train some new people to help them. Meanwhile a little girl named Angel is a eyewithness ( neighbour of that church ) that something trange is happened into that church and she gget kidnapped by the supernatural for a human sacrifice…The priests who know from the case getting killed one by one and the police can't find a killer.

Meanwhile Tracy, Jake, Robin( Will Smith, Sean Patrick Flannery , Christina Ricci that's my cast) are the new generation ghostbusters who will be trained and fight ghosts with the help of louis Tully. Things getting worse when they find out that there is a hellversion of the ghostbusters…Venkman dissapears…Walter Peck tries to close there bussiness again…their containment unit explodes….a mjor fight between two ghostbusters…But one good thing Winston Zeddemore makes his come back to kick ghostbut…The president speak out the emergency situation and there is one team who can save the world… Will they succeed???????