Suddenly the whole world explodes just as Ray reaches the Ecto-1A.
THE END :p
LOL Sorry, couldn't resist.
Fan Fiction "One sentence at a time"
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“Ghostbusters: Revenge of the Environmental Protection Agency.” :-)
Who knew they were going to save the day! No more ghostbusters, no more supernatural activity!
“This is it! This is the sign!” :-)
oops, it's the whole world that exploded… I thought it was ecto1, killing the ghostbusters at the same time :p
oops, forgot one “*” :p **
Peter Venkmen
Suddenly the whole world explodes just as Ray reaches the Ecto-1A.
THE END :p
LOL Sorry, couldn't resist.
lol
“Ghostbusters: Revenge of the Environmental Protection Agency.” :-)
Who knew they were going to save the day! No more ghostbusters, no more supernatural activity!
“This is it! This is the sign!” :-)
oops, it's the whole world that exploded… I thought it was ecto1, killing the ghostbusters at the same time :p
oops, forgot one “*” :p **
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16 years, 9 months ago
**Sorry kingpin I must have miss understood your sentence i will edit my post so that it ties in better also I wasn't familar with that location I thought it was a station people parked at on the way to the liberty island**
**also If some one could clean up the previous post to have the (**) around them so people wont confuse it for being part of the story that would be great.
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**also If some one could clean up the previous post to have the (**) around them so people wont confuse it for being part of the story that would be great.
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The whole time ray never seem to notice the darkness coming on as he seemed to be in his own world thinking about something. Then out of no where he pops his head up and looks at the other ghostbusters and ask them a question.
**This should tie in a little better and help the next person to point the story in the right direction and once again kingpin sorry about the mess up**
**I guess this is where the story will continue?**
“Guys what if we didnÂt really destroy Vigo, that would explain why the river of slime is growing.” Said Ray with worriment.
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“Perhapse, but a study of the painting didn't even reveal any trace readings of when Vigo inhabited it.” Egon contemplated.
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“So if the slime didn't disappear completely after Vigo was destroyed and there seems to be no trace of Vigo left. Then the question is where did the slime come from?” Peter implies.
**glad to see the story get back on track**
**glad to see the story get back on track**
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“Let me try and get this straight. What your saying is that Vigo didn't cause the slime to manifest, but the slime caused Vigo to manifest…the slime was already here before Vigo?” Winston state in slight confusion.
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“For the lack of a better explanation until we have more evidence, yes”. Egon nodded.
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“Probably the trail started by that Slime ball Hardemeyer…I wonder whatever happened to him anyway” Peter said.
**ooc: ok so I originally wanted to say Peck…but I figure its GBII and Peck has been (more or less) forgotten and Hardemeyer is pretty fresh in their minds though. Also trying to throw in references to the novelization/ooc**
**ooc: ok so I originally wanted to say Peck…but I figure its GBII and Peck has been (more or less) forgotten and Hardemeyer is pretty fresh in their minds though. Also trying to throw in references to the novelization/ooc**
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Egon gives peter the usual sarcastic look and says “I doubt that Hardemeyer had anything to do with the slime unless he is a thousand years old. I think we need to go back down the tunnels and do a reinvestigation the river of slime”