Fan Fiction "One sentence at a time"


by Bladex_2004

16 years, 11 months ago


Winston replies in a slight kinda panic “we are gonna bring the packs this time, right?

and under his breath says
”I hate trains"

by JamesCGamora

16 years, 11 months ago


Peter pats Egon on the back and begins to walk off “You guys have fun with that. I have a…meeting…with Miss Barrett I need to attend and will be unavailable for…atleast the weekend…maybe till Christmas of 93”

by mdp872105

16 years, 11 months ago


Ray looks at peter in a shocked manner and says, “Come on peter you could be missing out on one of the most important discovery of man kind. This slime could be hundreds even thousands years old!”

by Kingpin

16 years, 11 months ago


**Van Horne was part of the tunnels where the Slime was, it was the one where Ray, Egon and Winston fell into the river, but I digress… for now we'll work on the idea that they're still outside.**

“Fantastic! We can pour it into jars and sell it as a new age Dinosaur Mood lamp!”

by mdp872105

16 years, 11 months ago


Rain starts to fall outside as the Ghostbusters continues there discussion about there slime but somehow the rain was different almost as if it knew something was going to happen.

**I agree kingpin that we should gang shouldn't go to the river of slime just yet. I was just trying to help guide the story also this post is trying add a little description to the scene**

by Bladex_2004

16 years, 11 months ago


Ray says “before go below again, maybe we should do some more research, like checking some of the text for references to the slime.”

by JamesCGamora

16 years, 11 months ago


“More background research on the slime is definately needed. It is possible we missed something when looking into Vigo.” Egon added as he looks over to Ray

by Kingpin

16 years, 11 months ago


Lightning crackled above the city, sending blasts of blue light down the concrete canyons and reflectiong off of the glass skyscrapers.

“What took you guys so long? I got back here twenty minutes before you guys finally showed up.” Janine asked as the Ghostbusters entered the Firehouse.

:oes descriptive stuff that isn't dialogue also count under the ‘one sentence’, or is that exemplt within reason?::

by mdp872105

16 years, 11 months ago


“Oh come on Janine you know how it is for the heroes of the city. Food, women, adoring fans, walking giant statues back across the harbor” peter replied

**exemplt within reason **
**Also nice description you really helping give the story a little more life**

by JamesCGamora

16 years, 11 months ago


Egon begins to walk off “I am going to begin research immediatelly. Ray do we still have any of the slime we collected left?”