Fan Fiction "One sentence at a time"


by JamesCGamora

16 years, 9 months ago

“Enjoying the lime-light associated with being the 5th Ghostbuster” Janine said.


**ooc: I kind of like the idea of the guys dealing with Louis and everyone else (outside of the company) thinking he is the 5th Ghostbuster after what the public thought he did (or witnessed him do more like) during New Years Eve. /ooc**

by mdp872105

16 years, 9 months ago

Over at time square the people gather around as they see Louis walking down the streets in full Ghostbusters gear.

**I agree how about giving him a big ego for a short time because at the end of the movie he did think he took out the slime.**

by JamesCGamora

16 years, 9 months ago

**ooc: I was thinking the very same thing /ooc**

Louis stopped near an alley-way and struggles for a moment to climb up on a dumpster to get a higher advantage. After finally getting his footing he throws up his arms “Ladies and…uhh…Gentlement..” before he can finish he slips and falls backward into the dumpster

by Kingpin

16 years, 9 months ago

The crowd bursts into laughter, but it was tinged with an edge of fondness that many wouldn't normally associate with New Yorkers.

“Uh… thanks… now, erm… according to this PKE Meter, there's a… uh… Class Two phantasm here… and I, ah… um, I'm going to try trap it.”

by JamesCGamora

16 years, 9 months ago

**Ooc- Your characterization of him is much better than mine. I kept replaying all of his dialouge in my head to try and thing “How would louis say this” but I kinda-failed. /Ooc**

by mdp872105

16 years, 9 months ago

The crowd burst into a loud cheer while Louis slowly slips his way off the dumpster falling as soon as his feet touch the ground. He slowly gets up and shouts to the crowd that he's okay and with PKE meter in hand walks slowly down the dark alley way.