((This is a idea I had for a kinda continuation of the Ghostbuster Legacy, also im a new member here so im looking forward to being a part of the Community. Well, I hope you guys enjoy this new idea, don't forget to leave some feedback aswell!))

/Title\
Ghostbusters: Ultra Legacies

/Setting\
New York City

/Year\
October 16th, 2007 (24 years after the ghostbusters team was founded, and 4 years after the original team retired)

Janurary 27th, 2025 (This date will come into play, about 9 or 10 chapters into the story)

/Plot\
1984, a legend was born when the original Ghostbusters team was created, their job was to combat undead ghosts around the New York City area…Most people know the story of how they got started, and how they ended up.

The legacy of the ghostbusters, will finally recive the mention it so richly deserves. It's now been almost 5 years since the original team retired, a new team will now come face to face with the paranormal…Under the guidance of their mentors Egon Spengler and Dr. Ray Stantz they will take up where the original Ghostbusters, left off.

A new ghostly spirit has arrived, this one will test the new teams power to work together and save the city.

The spirit is that of a 500 year old Demonic Warlord known only as Cerberus. He is hellbent on claiming our world as his own, the only thing standing between him and our world are the Ghostbusters.

Ghostbusters: Ultra Legacies is almost here, get ready to witness the new fan fiction adventure of the new team of Ghostbusters…Coming to a computer near you, very soon!

/Main Charecters\
Harold Ramis- Dr. Egon Spengler
Dan Aykroyd- Dr. Raymound Stantz
Annie Potts- Janine Melnitz
Ghostbuster #1- Brandon Stantz
Ghostbuster #2- Samantha Kelly
Ghostbuster #3- Jeremy Young
Ghostbuster #4- Leon Daniels

Note: I didn't include actors because I want the fans to envision each character in their minds, i've found that this way is better in that the readers get to use their imaginations, when visualizing the characters…The only actors are that of the actors of the original GB Characters.

The first chapter will be up very soon, get ready for the next step in the Ghostbuster Legacy!

Only really four things off of the top of my head:

1) It's actually spelt SPENGLER
2) The main villian is tied into Vigo? I believe that might be slightly contrived… whilst it would depend on how it was done is the connection with Vigo the Carpathian neccesary?
3) “Ultra Legacies”? I'm probably not one to talk with my own foree with “Ghostbusters Legacy”, but “Ultra Legacies” seems a bit pretentious a fic series title, almost like it were a futuristic Ghostbusters series.
4) Depending how it's done, the chrystal liquid may be too similar to the way Vigo's slime was portrayed in the second film… but that may be what you're going after.

I'm not trying to be a pain in the butt, but I've done some writing (for those who remember that little thing known as Ghostbusters Legacy and Ghostbusters UK) and I simply wanted to express my concern as a writer to another writer.

I appreciate the Feedback, as im open to any suggestions people may have about the story. Also, I have been thinking about reformating the story as I've had a few new idea's and have thought about some of the things you just listed.

Also, I know I spelt Spengler wrong which was a small typo in the second draft I wrote of the Stories info I spelt it right the first time, so I don't know why I spelt it wrong the second time…Also about Vigo, im changing the villain of the story a bit aswell making him into a new unknown character just entering the Ghostbuster Universe.

About the title, I named it that way because somewhere down the road I plan on jumping to the year 2025 and describing my take on a Ghostbuster team in the future…Hence why I set this story in 2007, so that it wouldn't be as big a leap from then to 2025.

All in all I truly do appreciate your feedback and I welcome any help/feedback anyone else wants to give, especialy after I finish with the reformat of the story I have planned out.

Edit: The plot reformat is complete, I also fixed up a few typos aswell which makes it look alot more neat and organized.

I can see a trend forming…