Dr.D;135835
I just suggested some changes that could make it great. I also agree with devilmanozzy that the dialogue needs a bit of tweaking, but it wasn't horrible.

Ok I admit I went overboard a bit, its just that everyone talks a good game with these fan projects, then the end result turns out bad. It annoys me. I'm sure its not as bad as some vids out. Boholbrook vids are ten times worse because they only use Ghostbusters based Uniform and call it ghostbusters.

Like said, the vid needs to be shorter and more exciting. In the Cops shows they chase suspects in many parts, and that would have helped in dealing with ghosts. Maybe a segment with a ghost that is disturbing the peace and the ghostbusters talk the ghost down, then bust him like getting in a car. Also, the use of a Green/Blue room may make the ghosts better.

Also to note, the show would be shorter since the tv ads don't cover the right amount of time. Maybe 23 minutes. More text would help during the show like giving the time and stuff like in cops.

If you are doing ads it should be 3 to 4 ads at 30 to 60 seconds each. Spoofs of real ads with ghostbusters terms and such would be ideal.

So in short, you need to rethink this and think about the audience.

as a big fan of reno 911 I love this show. You pegged the atmosphere and humor of the show and applied it well to the ghostbusters franchise. The characters are awkward and human, which is PERFECT.

For everyone expecting epic busts and heroic acts, You've kinda missed the point of the show. Watch a few episodes of reno 911 and you'll probably get the joke.

Can't wait for more.

Nice work guys! Funny stuff and cool production values. In October of 2006, my friends and I released our own GB/Reno 911 spoof. Check out ours and friend us! www.myspace.com/gboncall

This isn't really a fan film series, more of a parody series if what Misfit says is true. In which case, I understand it a bit more. But the trailers painted a very different picture of what the series is.

Dr. D trust misfit and me when I say this. Reno 911 is just like the ghostbustin 911 I think you will appreciate the show more once you see it and see where they are getting there motivation from.

Also the trailers for reno 911 are the same.

not bad at all, i loved the shaggy bid, whatever happened to the ghost at the begining of the episode, oh and when they pick up the hooker on accident and shine the trap in her eyes, lol

cant wait for the second episode

I didnt really know waht to think when I first heard of the series but I dig it. Also I LOVE the Ecto!

The Shaggy part was pretty funny.

devilmanozzy;135887
Boholbrook vids are ten times worse because they only use Ghostbusters based Uniform and call it ghostbusters.

Oh for…

We don't make fan films, you tool. We do a video BLOG.

Ectoman57
not bad at all, i loved the shaggy bid, whatever happened to the ghost at the begining of the episode, oh and when they pick up the hooker on accident and shine the trap in her eyes, lol

*The “hooker” looks like one of my ex's ha ha ;P…

*Cheers.