improval


by J.C

22 years, 6 months ago


Those of you who have read my Unusual Aspects story should note that it was indeed very ‘messy’ and there wasen't any paragraphs!smile

But part two is longer, it has paragraphs and is very punctual!smile
Its pending for approval right now. Stay tuned! And I hope you do read it!smile

by Twister

22 years, 6 months ago


Yeah, it was a bit messy, but I'm looking forward to reading the next part..