Well, Nightsquad fought Jason

BraxtanFilms fought Freddy

I fight Michael Meyers every night

It's useless

I can see whats going to happen already
say they gbs do fight jason since people in the bad movies or stories aint very smart the gbs will be less the intelligent get a call investigate and split up.
one of the gbs will go down a long hallway or dark room and run into jason blast away think they have him down jason will come up cut off a hand or half his arm and they will fall down and look up and right before jason strikes him down completely 2 or the rest of the gbs will come out of thin air blast him in the back and send him flying through the wall or send him running for now and they will take the injured gb to the hospital and get him fixed up that gb will feel useless with only having a stump now and will set up something similar to ash and the chainsaw and it will be an upgraded weapon (kinda like the real gb episode where the decide to fight crime and turn the traps and stuff into energy jails or whatever) and they will take jason down…But seeing how this is either a bad story or bad movie just before the credits roll
***BAM*** he opens his eyes or stands up or something to that effect and Thus you have Craptacular sequels and a way to make more money off of people

for example the movie that should never be spoken of (Jason X)

:-) Thats just how i see it no offense

its not gona be like what blade said im even useing a diffrent team becase the orgnel team wont but up a much of a fight becase threre old now real old the teams members are
ricky lodowski
john vekmen
bob smuff
sally morse
welll ricky lodowski is the name of my son so im just puting him in as a 17 yer old goofball i got some of it done here
a young woman is runing from some thing in centrel park she trips on a stone and falls in the grass and you see the shadow of jason he rasies his mahcde and swings the screen fades to black as you hear a scream then it fades back in the backround you see a house in the suburbs logo comes on screen jason vs the ghostbusters or jvgb then you see ricky reading the jobs secton in the news paper hes dad comes in with a box of cerreal in his hand still looking for job eh? he says ya dad rick says hmmm you see on the news paper ghostbuster wanted i think ill be ghost buster rick says ghosts demons gouls i dont bleave in that crap his dad says says well im aplling for it ok dad rick says ok just dont come crying to me when you get fired his dad says so what do you think guys like it

(*spam) (*rant) look im workning real hard on this and you guys just keep riping on me saying some thing like its gona be craptackulaur or some thing the onleyones with me are fome and ty fire all you ather guys are being so mea

Everybody works hard on something. And if they don't like it, complaining about it won't make anything better. Sorry, but this is what happens when you step into writing. You're gonna have to learn to take criticism.

Besides that, it doesn't seem like you're researching the characters enough to do a proper crossover. Research, watch a few movies, then get writing. That's the best thing to do. You can't do anything about other peoples opinions.

Some interim notes:

1) You have a character named “Vekman”? Isn't that just a bit too similar to “Venkman” if these guys aren't related to the Ghostbusters.

2) Try separating bits of speech that aren't from the same character and using speech marks (these: “”) for when a person is talking… Not to mention making sure you use correct punctuation such as the comma (,) and the full stop/period (.) to help make something easier to read for your intended audience.

For example, here's what you've written so far with a bit of cleaning up:

A young woman is running from something in Central Park, she trips on a stone and falls in the grass and you see the shadow of Jason. He rasies his machete and swings… The screen fades to black as you hear a scream.

It then fades back, in the backround you see a house in the suburbs. The logo comes on screen: “Jason vs the Ghostbusters” or “JvGB”.

You then see Ricky reading the jobs secton in the newspaper, his Dad comes in with a box of cerreal in his hand.
“Still looking for job eh?” He says.

“Ya, Dad.” Rick says. “Hmmm you see on the newspaper? Ghostbuster wanted I think i'll be a Ghostbuster!” Rick says.

“Ghosts, demons, gouls… I don't believe in that crap.” His Dad says.

“Well i'm applying for it, ok Dad.” Rick says.

“Ok, just dont come crying to me when you get fired.” His Dad says

What you may wish to do is get it all written down and then ask someone to format it into a novel or script style… depending how you want the story-telling to appear as. I truely think that if you wrote a whole story like that a lot of people would be turned off by it all running together.

I apologise if this comes off as heavy handed, but I bet you few would be willing to read it without substantial editing work.

I once made a “Jason vs. Ghostbuster” fan film when I was…..for those that have seen, it's one of those “so bad it's AMAZING” type films…It's still online…somewhere.

I wish you luck and remember to have fun! Any exercise in writing is a means of improvement! What better way to hone in on a craft than practice?

finally someone with some good advice…

don't give up ghostbusters 3007 show them what you got!

oh sorry kingpen by venkmen i tiped it wrong hes the son of peter veikmen and thanks fome and draft kid

My name… is Kingpin. It's right above my avatar as is Eddie's which is Daftkid.

So you have a team that isn't the original New York Ghostbusters but is based in New York and has Peter Venkman's son, what year is this story set in?