plz dont mind my bad english heehhe i hope it all makes sence here is a start of a script for GB 3 i have in my mind.

Screenplay : Rene Pol.

Faid in from sky.

A park in NY – DAY

The sun shines brightly, Ducks are swimming in the pound.A dog and it’s owner play with a frisbee, Children play socker at an open field..

The scene.

Buseniss man on his luch break.

A male age around 40 arives walking in the park where he decides to have some lunch
Wearing a suit and carrieng his suitcase.
He sits on down on a bench opens his briefcase and takes out his sandwich.
He eats and enjoys the sun.

Camera zooms out and we see the mans shadow on the foor behind the bench.
We see the shadow grow bigger it’s looking like moving smoke taking a shape.
The man feels shivers feeling cold and gets the feeling there’s something behind him.
We see the shadow rise up as if it becomes a shadow like beast.
The man turns a round.
Camera looks into mans face as we see him scream……. While dark smoke
Is surrounding his head.

Faid out. GB logo 3 appears music.

Scene 02.

We see a nice luxe apartment interieur, A kid sits on the bench watching a real ghostbusters cartoon.
We hear the phone ringing……….


Dana : Peter ? can you take it i am in the shower……..

Peter : Do i have to ? i am just reading some interesting scientific material,

We see peter venkman in a study room behind a pc looking at some nude pictures. Looking bored.
He walks into the room the sound of the tv is pretty loud and we hear the gb tune.
He takes the phone of the hook.


Peter : Hello this better be interested otherwise your talking to the answering machine.

Peter : What ? whoooo hooo slow down. Nooooo.. really ? yeah….. mmm……k…… which channel ?

He takes the remote control from the boy Oscar and switches the channel to a news channel.


Channel news tv :

In central park a strange yet shocking event has taken place. Eye witnesses claim the saw a huge black
Man beast choking a man as it suddenly disappeared leeaving the man in shock. The person is in a coma
And……………

Peter : Just a typical New york day god i love this town

Peter : k. Ray i be there in 30 minutes or sooo

Dana walks through the room only wearing a towl. Peter looks at her as she passes him by.

Peter : Ray ehmmmm make it 60 minutes tops.

Fade out

Scene 03.

We are back at the scene of the crime egon and ray are allready there with some messure euipment.
Peter arrives.

Peter : Hey guys wazzzzzup |

Ray : well peter you saw the news so me and egon decided to check out the scene but the pk level is
very low hardly worth to mention.

Peter : and isnt that suppose to be when there is nothing to messure after all i dont see a black man beast here do you ?

Egon : No peter what ray ment is normally with all encounters we found left over traces so we could pick up the trail of a ghost. This time there’s nothing.

Peter : meaning ?

Ray : meaning the people just mass hallucinated it or we are dealing with dimensional ghosts.

Peter : I get it like we need 3d glasses to see it ?

Egon : No it means we might deal with spiritits we cant stop at all.

Ray : Yeah and this time it’s not only hitting NY there been rapports over clack monster creatures and victems all over the country i just hear it on the way to this place.

Peter : Well it’s been a while since we really met some ghost any chance it has something to do with vigo or even gozer ?

Egon : No peter this is something completely new im not sure if were able to crack this puzzle.

Peter : And you say you cant find anything here ?

Ray : Yup zip nada nothing……

Peter : Well you guys could run some tests on the man thats in coma.

Egon/Ray : Noooo

Peter : its proberly our only lead and i am getting in a GB mood. Familie live makes a man lazy

Ray : we cant do that peter its inmoral what would the famili of the victum say

Egon : Ray is right peter we have to wait for an other event and try to eyewitness it ourselves.

Fade out.

Scene 04.

Fade in

We are in a hospital egon is wearing a doctors uniform as peter and ray are standing next to him.

Peter : k this is the right hall room 13 you should take. You have all stuff you need ?

Egon : i still think we cant…

Peter : Just be the doctor. Egon be the doctor who are you ?

Egon : ehm a doctor

Peter : right on now get in there

We see egon walk i the hall as ray and peter stays

Peter : did someone warned winston yet ? after all he is an original ghost buster he should share the premiere .

Ray : yeah i did he’s flying over from our facility in dallas.

Peter : Yeah we finally got what we deserve last time we saved new york.

Ray : Yeah peter i must admit it was a good idea to start ghostbusting training schools.

Peter : yup i think people learned from the last few times even we havent seen anything the last passed years.

Ray : Untill now.

Peter : Untill now.

Fade out.