My first


by samuraijackGB

22 years, 6 months ago


This is my first so don't get mad please. OK


Samurai jack was walking along the newyork city road when robots from aku attacked him he said just bring it samurai jack won the ghostbusters saw him they said WHAT THE HELL! and walk up to him and jack looked at them with surprise eyes vankmen said whats your name and jack said my name is JACK SAMURAI JACK then egon said A samurai ok vankmen said do you want to join the gb jack said what do you do spangerler said we catch ghost and stop them jack said I WILL JOIN jack put on a proton pack and went crazy vankmen said OH HE WILL GET USE TO IT.

by Kingpin

22 years, 6 months ago


Well, apart from a need of punctuation it sounds okay so far.

by samuraijackGB

22 years, 6 months ago


he he sorry. I was just posting it for the fun of it, if you know what I mean.

by Kingpin

22 years, 6 months ago


Fair enough.