Personaly i think my script sucks big hary balls but that is my opinion, ive never made a script before and i didnt add any dialog and its pretty vague but tell me what you think so…. here it is(im only posting 2/4 scenes but if you want more tell me)EDIT: plz give me advice or some feedback

Scene 1: Opening Title
Ghostbusters theme song with the no-ghost logo pointing 3 fingers up. Fades in on the fire station in New York City and the GB are talking about new cases they just got in about major spooks. Soon after, the guys get a call about (everyone favorite ghost) slimer. The GB go to the Grand Hyatt hotel (next to the Chrysler Building). On the 30th floor they find slimer terrorizing some poor old women after they get her out of the way they bust slimer with the new and improved trap (works 50% better and is lighter for traveling purposes)

Scene 2: THERE BACK!
After busting slimer the GB go back to the station and set him free in the fire house. The buzz is all around New York that the Ghostbusters are back and are getting front-page pictures, TV interviews, and a lot of calls in the office. After a few other calls the guys start to experience paranormal activity at their homes. They start to bust the ghosts one at a time through fierce proton and Ecto-Plasmic goo battles. At Egons house, the fight a giant, super slimy, bug type thing. At Winston’s house, they find his wife possessed by a Resident Evil type zombie. After using the new (un-possessing weapon need a name) they free his wife and get the zombie. The others have no problems at their houses.

hmmm…. no one yet i must really be bad

What I'd suggest is pace things out a bit more, plots are meant to develop at a specific rate to keep the reader/viewer interested. Additionally, utilise previously established stuff and don't borrow too much from other franchises, people won't be expecting suff that looks like it belongs in Resident Evil in a GB film. Not too sure why someone'd be possessed by a zombie, they're reanimated undead…

The other thing is, why are they out of business, again? It could seem too much like the last film in the whole ‘revving up because they’re back!' thing.

What do you mean the trap works 50% better?

the new trap is 50% better……as in it works better than it did in the first 2 movies

Those ideas aren't bad……as I said before, I'm not that great at just popping ideas in my head like that….so kudos to you….keep at it!!!

thankyou very much GBusterChick6884