Yes Another one now Im a Ghostbusters Fan Myself…I may not be a “Hardcore” Fan like most of you (*rant) but I hope this will satisfy the fans here or at least tried my best…


I got quite a few New People that can Make good New Generation Ghostbusters and have Egon,Ray,Peter and Winston Mentor them (Or have one of them Mentor the New Blood) Heres Who I choose for the New Generation Ghostbusters Team… cause everytime I write a Fan Fic/Script I like to do fantasy castings as well so i can picture the characters alot better…so here would be my fantasy cast of the New Ghostbusters team…


Danielle Harris (Rachel Strode)-Make her the First Woman on the Team and Give her a Tomboysish attitude…a tough girl persona something like that..Give her a New role and let her show her really good acting skills show she doesnt always have to play the helpless girl.I got the name Rachel Strode from the Halloween Movies she has starred in..so if you seen any of the Halloween Movies youll understand where i got the name from…

Topher Grace(Edgar Spangler)-Make him Egon's Son if done right He can Pass off as Harold Ramis' Son in the movie I even gave him the Name Edgar Spangler.I chose Topher Grace to Portray the Character of Edgar since I have looked at Pics of Harold Ramis When he was In the Ghostbusters Movie and Pics of him Today and I think they could pass off as a Father and son…Plus Im giving him the Typical “Dad Please Stop Living In The Pass Attitude” ordeal until the New Team is formed.But when hes with the team he is Similar to Egon work wise but is a Little more Smart mouthed than Egon as well as having a Sly attitude


Anthony Anderson (Terrance Johnson)- Give him a Similar role to Winston execpt give him more of a comic relief role and make him a little bit more dimwitted than Ray.. If you have seen in prevouis movies (such as Big Momma's House) you'll understand why I picked him…



Freddy Rodríguez (Luiz Nunez)-Kind of like Eduardo from Extreme Ghostbusters but make him a little more Light Hearted but still has they attitude. I would say I picture Freddy Rodriguez from Grindhouse do to his El Wray Character as well as his Many voice Talents..


And also Defently have the New Team along with The Orginal Team work togther in the Last Battle of the Movie to stop the Evil that there Trying to beat…and defently have the New Teams first Ghost to capture be Slimer.. If the script is done Properly I think it would make a Good movie…and make a Good Ghostbusters III Or even a Brand new Movie…



So here is The Start of my Scrip..I


GHOSTBUSTERS: The New Generation

Written By Stephen Lewis

Based On Characters By

Harold Ramis and Dan Aykroyd






Part 1- Professor Spangler

:The Credits and the Movie Title go along with the Ghostbusters Movie Theme and then the screen goes to Present Day New York at a Local Collage with a older Egon Spangler teaching a Class on the Paranormal. The Ghostbusters business shut down in 1995 due to the lack of paranormal activity within New York. Egon now in his late forties early fifties is show teaching his paranormal class where only four of them are interested as the rest of the class show boredom and are either sleeping or on the cell phones..



Egon-Class today we will be talking about Ecto plasma hallucinations does anyone know what they are…

-A young man with similar looks to Egon raises his hand in a attempt to help Egon out waits to be picked out by the discouraged collage professor…

Edgar Spangler-A Ecto plasma hallucination is made by witchcraft of three witches with similar names as well as a family bond. Mostly these are made by reciting the spell to vanquish the evil with in…

-Edgar finishes with the correct answer as some of the students give the oh what a nerd look as Egon smiles at his son knowing he taught him well. Egon continues with his teaching and asks another question-



Egon-Can anyone give me the answer of the incident of 1984 when myself along with Dr Stantz as well as the rest of the crew when we where against the Gatekeeper and The key master…


-A young woman with a tomboyish yet very petite and beautiful despite her look raises her hand and waits for Egon to pick her-


Egon-Yes you back there on the third row do you have the answer

-The Woman smiles and starts to explain the answer with ease-

Rachel Strode-Yes Dr Stantz had to choose the ‘Destructor’ or Gozer. As with what happened with the sumerians..The Form of the Destructor was I believe the Stay Puft Marshmellow man..


-A Heavy set black man with a really obnoxius laugh while eating some Stay Puft marshmellows speaks and interups Rachel..-

Terrance Harris-So What you sayin is That yall fought Mr. Stay Puft!!!!!and he was like King Kong or some shit like that!!!!


-laughing obnoxiusly along with the whole class Rachel gives a attidue look towards Terrance as Egon smiles at Rachel knowing that she is one of the good students and is taking this classes seriously the bell rings and Egon speaks..-


Egon- OKAY CLASS DISMISSED THERE WILL BE A QUIZ NEXT WEEK AS WELL AS THE TERM PAPERS ARE DO TOMARROW!!!NO EXUSES!!!


-The Whole Class Leaves as Rachel Walks by herself and Terrance walks out with his Books and Open package of Stay Puft Marshmellows a Short yet built Latino guy is walking next to Terrance as they Exit the Classroom. As the rest of the students walk out of the class room Edgar,Egon’s only son speaks with him-

Edgar-Well dad your welcome..

Egon-[] Thanks son sometimes I just don’t think most people in the class take this seriously I mean with the modern tecnology they can easily print a Term paper..Sometimes I just wish I can get back with the guys and have same fun of catching Ghost and the adrenalin rush that came with it..

-Egon going into his desk and sits on the chair gets the old Patch from The Ghostbusters and looks at it smiling as Edgar starts to speak-

Edgar-Dad you need to stop living in the past..There hasn’t been any paranormal activtiy in New York since 95 I mean dad seriously where living in a Old Fire station where your busniess used to be as well as having that old 1959 Cadillac Miller-Meteor..I mean what else are We gonna do there is no way that your old partneers would ever come back as they retired from the Busniess…


-Egon looking at the patch puts it back in the drawer and shuts the desk as he grabs his brief case of the students paper work as well as his own and he stands up pushes the chair in.

Egon-If we could just make a great comeback something paranormal to happen would just be great again…



-The Screen fades to black as it fast forwards to the start of the night at a frat house a huge party is going on. Loud music,Beer,and all the works..as they party was going on the view pans in on Terrance and the Latino man..Terrance speaks to him with some beer in hand-

Terrance-So Luiz this is collage life???Hot young women ,beer,trying to get laided what else can you ask for more??

Luiz Nunez-I know how about getting a Fat Oboxius black man to Shut THE FUCK UP!!!!That would be Hillarous!!

-The two young men both laugh as they sip there beers and the music gets louder and the collage students get rowdier another group of young men that seem to be the jocks of the collage have possetion of a dusty bookas they are in a separate room.-

Jock1-Hey Ted look at this some weird cult crap.

Ted-[]Just rember don’t read anything you [] DON’T UNDERSTAND!!!

Jock 2-Dr Spangler what a frekin spaz that old man is still thinking hes gonna keep the paranormal away..So what do we got to do on this book???

Jock1-Its some sort of cult mumbo jumbo..

-The three young men start to recite the transcript slopply but eligble as they recite it.after the young men Recite the transcript lighting and darkness surround the whole frat house..three woman like figures appear levitating…not speaking to the young men slowly open there eyes…as the three women have there white eyes open the three jocks scream in agony as it switches to a Public Libaray where the audience sees Rachel studing for the test that Egon has given out Rachel taking a mere break from her studies.Until she sees a Entity that looks like a mere Libraian standing there fixing some books Rachel looks at the entitiy and speaks to her self writing it down in her journal of records of paranormal activity speaking silently to her self-

Rachel-Wow this is more amazing then when I saw JFK..wow

-After Rachel speaks the enetity hears her and gives the SHHH!!!noise and jesture Rachel decides to take out her Digital camera to take a picture of the Entity..Geting ready to take the picture she aims at the Entity fileing the books and slowly waits for the perfect shot .-
Rachel-Okay Just stay there that’s good that’s good..

-Just as the Flash went off the Entity goes Insane and changes to a insane deformed creature that chases after Rachel.As she is running her camera is Dropped and smashed as some slime is left on it.-


Its not done quite yet as that as far as I gotten to!!! I Will Post More SOON!!!!!!

Please I need Feed back!!!
I know some of the Dialogue is Choppy and its not the greatest in the world but I did my best!!!! (^_^)

I can't remember if I stopped reading when you said
Anthony Anderson as a Ghostbuster or whether it was Freddy Rodriguez as a Ghostbuster. :p


Just kidding(well actually I'm not), Your premise sounds interesting, I don't have a chance to read it all right now, but I certainly will sooner rather than later. And welcome to the boards.