i have a problem with that. when i write something it seems long but when i read it it is really short. if it was on tv then (including commercials) it might be able to come out a good 20 minutes.
my Ghostbusters tv show
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18 years, 6 months ago
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18 years, 6 months ago
where it says bit there in that last message that is a typo. i meant it. sorry.
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18 years, 6 months ago
i noticed a typo in the script. the line is his eyes turn red and fangs appear in his mouth. sorry. the guy doesnt have eyes in his mouth :-)
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18 years, 6 months ago
please use the edit function to fix any typos and faults you find in previous post instead of multi-posting!
i like it…it's interesting, needs alot of padding and a little less running around and just busting, there should be something clever about the episode that makes it memorable. something that one of them works out at the last second. i was taught that you start with an equilibrium…then you proceed to break that equilibrium…then return to a new equilbrium. that made no sense and i'm gonna stop…someone care to reiterate this in english for me? anyone?
-J.
i like it…it's interesting, needs alot of padding and a little less running around and just busting, there should be something clever about the episode that makes it memorable. something that one of them works out at the last second. i was taught that you start with an equilibrium…then you proceed to break that equilibrium…then return to a new equilbrium. that made no sense and i'm gonna stop…someone care to reiterate this in english for me? anyone?
-J.
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18 years, 6 months ago
thanks for all the tips and the compliments. i'm new to the message board and i didn't know about the edit thing. sorry.
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18 years, 6 months ago
don't worry i wasn't getting at you, just see alot of new people double / triple posting and it needs to be pointed out! would like to see more eps if that's possible?!
EDIT: Hell, i even double post sometimes!
-J. :-)
EDIT: Hell, i even double post sometimes!
-J. :-)
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18 years, 5 months ago
remember me? wow. its been a a while since i have been on this topic. i wanted to know if anybody is still interested in reading scripts from my gb show. if so i will post more
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18 years, 5 months ago
I would like to see the rest of the scripts this one is really good.
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18 years, 5 months ago
Just a thought too - you may want to pull the show to a solid 43 minutes for the hour. A 22 minute piece is just to quick (cartoons can do that, but you also miss out on so much interaction of the action and characters).
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18 years ago
it may please some of you to know that i have returned to writing episodes for ghostbusters forever and i plan on creating a website for it in the near future. i have just hit the 60 episode point and i'm taking a break for a little while to brainstorm some new ideas