
The stirring of the chalkboard is, in some ways, similar to the intro to Ghostbusters, with something innanimate starting to move being the signal of a paranormal presence…also…it could be said that the final comment is part of the desensitisation of today's children with modern special effects and horror movies…but that'd be overanalysation.

I liked it, and I look forward to seeing more, you could have a very promising idea on your hands.