Post Your Penciled Sequencial Art Here!!


by doyle

21 years, 2 months ago


yeah, I've always wanted to do a sort of adaptation of the first flikc, but not unless its a script by a semi-proffessional, who knows how to use sequentials and all that

by soulwrangler1

21 years, 2 months ago


I came in on this way late, wasn't going to do anything at all but changed my mind a couple of days ago. Behold 3 pages! because I still have to draw #4.

Sorry about the large file size on these for those of you who haven't discovered the magic of cable or dsl yet..

****Updated the first page with a colored and worded version, the others soon to follow. Just as a side note, I didn't do the coloring, my very talented friend maybesomeday from deviant art did.****







by PrincessArtemis

21 years, 2 months ago


Wow.

That's beauty SoulWrangler. Made my dial-up modem wheeze, but it was worth it.

by soulwrangler1

21 years, 2 months ago


Thank you Artemis, I look forward to seeing what you put up Browsed through your site earlier and really enjoyed the dueling egons.

by protoK

21 years, 2 months ago


yes those were good, but if i may, i have some suggestions.
first of all the proton packs are really inacccurate, they look cool but not that close too the movie
also, Mr. Stay Puft looks too sinister. one of the reasons the whole scene was funny was because he was cute. Yours just looks really evil,
on a minor note it would have been cool if you would have actually drawn the ghost in the shoulder patch

other than those things i really liked it alot :-)

by soulwrangler1

21 years, 2 months ago


Oh theres much more inaccuricies then the proton packs. tons. and a very valid criticism. My only response? drawing proton packs (even none movie based) is really friggin hard. My hand still hurts from drawing those, and they don't even look the same through out the pages!

and making stay puft not so happy was my creative decision. I think its funnier that Gozer would be intelligent enough to know it'd be turned into a 100ft tall Marshmallow man with a plastered on grin.

by roshangar

21 years, 2 months ago


SoulWrangler, RD, my hat's off to you guys. And since I always wear my ‘ol hat, that’s a very important compliment.

by PrincessArtemis

21 years, 2 months ago


SoulWrangler, thanks And thanks for a little extra push. I stupidly haven't started yet (since I only recently stupidly decided to go for it), not the pages anyway, but I have them planned out, and that's what staying up too late is for >_<

Removing tablet studies to conserve bandwidth–sequentials below…

by stay-puftdaddy1

21 years, 2 months ago


SoulWrangler,

I love that GB sequence. I think Stay-Puft looks fine being sinister (o_O) . And it's a comic, you have creative license on that stuff…packs included. :-)

Great stuff!

SPD (^_^)

by doyle

21 years, 2 months ago


this is all looking great, thanks for sharing. It'd be great if a fan got the job, then you'd know it'd be good