ABOVE NEW YORK CITY

Black clouds swirl together… lightening strikes.

EXT MAYORS OFFICE WINDOW

Lenny walks up to the window caustiously, his face full of horror. He peers out of the window…

LENNY: Somebody get me the Ghostbusters

Ray Parker Jr's GB theme starts up with the original spooky intro.

CUT TO

INT GB FIREHOUSE

Close up on Janine Melnitz, she is talking on the phone adn suddenly slams it down, and slaps her hand down on the bell.

CUT TO

EXT GB FIREHOUSE

The green firehouse doors burst open and the Ecto-1 screeches past and drives around the corner. A man in a messy blue suit is walking down the street, breifcase in hand. As the Ecto drives past him, it splashes water from a puddle on him. The man throws his breif case on the floor in anger and the camera zooms in on his face. It's Walter Peck, he sneers and spits.

CUT TO

INT DANA BARRETTS APARTMENT

Dana is happily playing an instrument, she hears the ECto-1 siren. Dropping her instrument she runs over to the window and pokes her head out. Below she sees the Ecto-1 drive past. She smiles as the sighjt of it and the camera zooms in on her face.

CUT TO

EXT SEDGEWICK HOTEL

The Ecto-1 drives past, a moment later a terrified crowd bursts out, followed by a small green ghost, it's face stuffed with hot dogs. The camera zooms in and it grins mischievously.

CUT TO

NEW YORK HARBOR

The area is under police control, there are are crowds behind police fencing. The camera pans in over the water, it is filled with ghosts and sea monsters.

CUT BACK TO

NEW YORK HARBOUR

The Ecto-1 pulls up, the GBs jump out and begin pulling on their equipment. At the back Louis Tully (in regular cloths) jumps out, he tries to run over to the Ghostbusters, waving a tax return in his hands. Louis is pulled back by two police officers, he futily points to the Ghostbusters and inaudibly begs to be let go, he is forced into the crowd.

The camera pans in on the back of the four Ghostbusters who are standing by the waterside looking out over it. The camera sweeps round to the front of them and stops ina picture perfect pose. The four GBs pull up their particle throwers and fire at the screen. There is an explosion and the screen goes black.

The no-ghost logo zooms into view….

Columbia Pictures' GHOSTBUSTERS

Outstanding!

There is only one word to describe what you said. WOW :O :0
I could picture it with the new looks of the boys in gray.

Best intro idea ever! :d

Sounds great, and I´m gonna ilustrate it too, just wait a little to draw it all.

That's cool, Sinister! :s :d

The Firehouse's doors should be black, though.

Yahoo that rocked, seems the inspirational sector of GBN has been revitalised!

Thanks, glad you like it guys, i feel all warm and fuzzy…

That's awesome man…!

Way to go, Sinister! That was really cool!

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