upcomming RGB fan fic i plan to write


by jka12002

16 years, 3 months ago


Title: RGB and the ghost of Owen Hart (RGB/WWE crossover)

story: While researching for recent ghost activity, Egon stumbles upon a video on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BkAicya8gSY

upon discovering this video, he researches and finds that the ghost is possibly that of Owen Hart who fell to his death in that arena in 1999.
The RGB travel to kemper arena and meet Randy Orton there who was possibly the only wrestler that witnessed the paranormal activity as revealed in the video.

Characters: Ray, Peter, Egon, Winston, Janie, Randy Orton, Slimer, Bret Hart, Owen Hart, and possibly Vince Mcmahon.

if you have any suggestions or ideas let me know. ill post the first chapter when i eventually get it done. (im in college so i may not have time to write much :p )

by Kingpin

16 years, 3 months ago


Well, the basis video isn't all that good… there are plenty of real-world explanations that account for that shape viewed in the Jumbovision shot that don't end in it being Hart's ghost.

It just seems like a rather flimsy way of crossing over RGB with WWE.

by jka12002

16 years, 3 months ago


They say that the figure in the jumbotron is supposed to be either the mask Owen was wearing on the day he died or an demonic skull.

nothing Egon cant figure out.

oh and a few story things ill include:

Slimer will have a strong fanatic reaction to Randy Orton (meaning he might get slimed lol)

Bret Hart will give the RGB's quite a hard time.

Janie will develop a crush on Randy, she will tag along for the trip.

A strong emotional moment will happen when Bret and Owen come face to face. i haven decided what will happen yet.

by Kingpin

16 years, 3 months ago


jka12002
Janie will develop a crush on Randy, she will tag along for the trip.

It's ‘Janine’, and Janine suddenly developing a crush for a wrestler? I can't say I buy the logic or the believability of it… Especially as, with the exceptions of the rebounds that were Louis Tully and Paul Smart, most of her life with the Ghostbusters has been devoted to trying to build a relationship with Egon.

Without some sort of justification, having her ‘suddenly’ develop a crush on Randy Orton feels like weak writing.

by doctorvenkman1

16 years, 3 months ago


Yea this whole concept seems extremely weak to me.

Let alone that video looks like nothing but the lights playing a trick on the camera. So if you have a weak starting point, chances are you're not gonna have much of a story. Which it seems like you don't.

I'd never discourage anyone from writing a story, but write a good one at least.